2013/11/13

Invent a story: As the concert finished, I heard someone shouting my name.

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  1. At the end of the holidays, Lara, moved house, she is now in the centre of France. I love her enormously. But life still continue. Today, I go to school, to high school. I'm in this school for only tree months. I already miss my old friends. We see us on the week-end but during the week I feel alone. Next year, I hope to change school.
    After school, I always go to internet to see if there is a good concert. Indeed there is the group “Fauve”, I really like this group. The concert was during the next holidays. With four others friends, we went to it. We waited all the day to have the nearer place from the scene. The room was full. When the concert finished, everybody shouted to continue, we were all shouting :“An other!” So they did an other song just for us. It was so awesome!
    As the concert finished, I heard someone shouting my name. I turned around and I saw Lara! We hugged us warmly. I didn't want to see her go an other time. We spent the next week together. As the holidays finished she went back home but next time I'll go to her home. I can't wait to see her.

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    1. "...holidays, Lara moved house. She now lives in the center of France..." "But life still continues." "Today, I go to high school. I will only be here for three months." "We see each other..." "...change schools" "...go on the internet" "The group "Fauve" is playing, and I really like this group." "I went to the concert with four other friends." "We waited all day to have the closest place from the stage." "We were all shouting, "Another!" "They did another song just for us."
      "We hugged each other" "...but next time I'll go visit her."

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  2. Last year, I lived something incredible. It was for my anniversary, my parents gave me a concert ticket to see Lana Del Rey. I was so excited because I love her and her music. During the concert, I have dancing, singing and a quite crying like never before ! When she sang " Young and Beautiful", she seemed to look at me ! 
    At the concert has finished, I was leaving it but I heard someone shouting my name. In fact, there is many people were shouting my name. I turned to see who are calling me and I see a big part of the auditorium looked at me. My favorite singer was on the scene and she started to sing "Happy birthday" and all the people continue to sing with her ! I was crying when someone took my hand and drove my on the scene. 
    When I was back to home, my parents told me that they preparing this for months !
    This night was my best anniversary EVER !!

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    1. "It was for my birthday..." "Last year, I had an incredible experience." "During the concert, I danced, sang, and cried like never before!"
      "As the concert finished, I began to leave, but I heard someone shouting my name. In fact there were many people shouting my name. I turned to see who was calling me, and I saw a big part of the auditorium looking at me." "My favorite singer was still on the stage and she started to sing, "Happy Birthday!" Everyone sang along with her! I began to cry when someone took my hand and pulled me onto the stage." "When I went back home, my parents told me that they had been preparing this for months! That night was my best birthday EVER!!"

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  3. Last weekend, me and my friends went to a concert in Paris, the concert of 1995 group, we really like this group with my friends ! When we arrived we were very happy because we wanted to come since longtime, and we were very impatient. It was awesome ! There was a lot of people and the room was completely full. As the concert finished, i left the room and then i heard somebody shouting my name, so i looked back and i saw a friend that i haven't seen since 2 years and we were very happy to see each other. We talked a lot, i asked him some questions, how he is going, what he is doing in his life etc... After this i went back home and i felt asleep

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    1. "...my friends and I went to a concert in Paris. The group 1995 was playing. My friends and I really like them. When we arrived, we were very happy, because we had wanted to see 1995 for a long time. We were also very impatient. The concert was awesome! There were a lot of people and the room was completely full. As the concert finished, I left the audience. Then I heard somebody shouting my name. I looked back and saw a friend that I hadn't seen in two years. We were very happy to see each other. We talked a lot. I asked him some questions: how is doing, what is he doing with this life, etc. After this experience, I went home and I fell asleep."

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  4. It was the fifteenth of June. It was the concert of my favourite singer ! My best friend, my aunt, an other friend and me went to this ' big event ' ( for me ! ). I was so excited...
    4 hours ago, I began to preparate me in the best friend's home.. My parents didn't know that I was going to go to the concert. They think that I was just sleeping quietly, calmy whereas in reality I was crying, shouting, singing, dancing..
    As the concert finished, I saw my favourite singer and he signed me an autograph. I even got to talk to him, give him gifts that I had prepared for him a long time ago.. I was so happy.. I have never felt this feeling of happiness. I wept with joy ! Everyone looked at me strangely but it didn't matter.. Moments later, I heard someone shouting my name.. It was the voice of a man.. It was my father and you can imagine his react !! At this point in time, I think I criied because I was very disappointed..
    To conclude, I will never forget this day because it was a ' perfect ' dream but at the end it was a nightmare..

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    1. "to prepare" "they thought" "he signed an autograph for me" "his reaction"

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  5. Sometimes, one person can change your life. Afterward, it never will be as before… Let me tell you my story.
    My name is Laura. I grew up with my aunt, Lily. My father died just before my birth and I’ve never known my mother. For 5 years, I have been a singer in a group called ‘’heavenly’’. We were two girls and three boys. We decided to make a concert at the end of the school year, in Paris. We were very excited and did many rehearsals to make an excellent performance!
    12th January, Paris.
    Today it’s the D-day. During the last rehearsal, I received a message from an unknown phone number. I read it and saw a photo… A woman was holding a little girl in her arms… The concert was starting. At the end of the first song, the entire audience broke into loud applause. We were really happy and proud of us. After the first five songs, there was an interval. The concert has finished at 10 o'clock, we were very exhausted. I turned on my mobile phone and I had a new message from the same unknown number saying:‘’ Hello Laura, I am Sarah, your mum…. I guess you must be very angry at me, I understand because I know what I’ve done is unforgivable but let me meet you just for a moment. I will wait for you at the end of your concert... I was going to delete it when suddenly I heard someone shouting my name...

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  6. "I started to get dress in my best friend's home..... they thought...... he signed an autograph for me.... cried.... that day"
    "your life so that it will never be the same.. I sang in a group/I was a singer for 5 years... Heavenly.... we decided to play at the end of ....we had many rehearsals so as to give...The concert had started.... proud of ourselves. The concert was over at........I know that what I did is ...

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  7. It was one year ago, during Easter holidays, I went to Paris with my boyfriend, Romain to go and see one of the most famous rap singer in the world, Eminem. What was happened in the end of this wonderful concert? Who was shouting my name?

    To begin with, at the age of 20, my parents gave me tickets for Eminem's concert, the 10 April 2012. Believe it or not there were two tickets, so I convinced my boyfriend, Romain to accompanied me. My aunt, Suzanne, accommodated us for only one night. The D-Day, in the afternoon, we started to get dress, so my aunt drove us there.
    The concert lasted about two hours and needless to say that it was the best concert that we have never seen.. As for me his lyrics gives me the creeps!
    When the concert finished, we decided to come back. When suddenly I heard someone shouting my name, I wonder why someone had shouted my name whereas I knew nobody here. So I looked back and I saw one of my friend, Lucas that I hadn't seen for 4 years, we had grown together during all our childhood ! And despite all these years, I remembered him perfectly. He had to go to Shanghai, because of his father who had been hired there for a better job. I seriously thought to see not again anymore, that reminds me of a very bad day..That's why, this evening, we were very happy to see each other. Moreover I gave him my number phone in order to see him again.

    In a nutshell, I had spent the most beautiful day of my life with the head full of memories.

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    1. As for me his lyrics gave me the creeps*

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    2. "one of the most famous rappers in the world" "what happened at the end of this..." "to accompany me" "I seriously thought I would never seen him again."

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  8. It was my fifth birthday and my present was a sejourn in Disneyland with my parents .
    In the afternoon we ate in a restaurants and all the characters were here , I was very exited and happy. At the end of the repast my birthday cake arrived and the characters have made a concert for me , I was quit suprise. When the sing was finish they were grouped and they have said one ...two ...tree ! And they have shouting my name , all the restaurant have heard and everybody wished my birthday.
    It was my favourite birthday !

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    1. "....my present was a trip to Disneyland..." "During the afternoon we ate in a restaurant with all the characters there. I was very excited and happy." "At the end of the meal, my birthday cake arrived and the characters performed a concert for me. I was quite surprised. When the song was over they came over in a group and said, "One... Two... Three! They shouted my name so loudly that the whole restaurant heard. Everyone wished me a happy birthday."

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