Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when...
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Hello! He was pushing his bike when he heard a terrifying noise coming from far away. He dropped his bike and put it under a tree in the wood. He started walking following the noise that was coming. Whenever, he took a step forward the noise becomes more and more deep and terrifying. After ten minutes of walking he discovered a large black metal door that suddenly opened in front of him. Julien had a desire to enter to see what was there but at the same time he was frightened. Suddenly when he decided to enter ; the door closed very quickly and finished being stuck. From now on , Julien could not get out of that door.
Hello! He was pushing his bike when he saw something in a terrifying forest. By taking a step back, Julien thought that nothing really dangerous could be here.Little by little, he saw a profile of someone who was moving really slowly. He caught sight of a men who was leaning on a kind of weird staff. The man was getting closer of Julien. Suddenly, Julien saw the face of the man. He was desfigured and had a knife. He was holding it in his second hand. When he saw that, Julien left his bike and ran away.
Julien was pushing his bike when he saw a strange light in the middle of a field next to him. He came closer to it, and saw a white ghost who was shining brightly, and moving towards him. When he realized it, he began to run, but the ghost was soon just behind him and Julien could hear his deep voice whispering some words into his ear : "where are you running to ? You can’t escape !" And suddently, the ghost touched him with his cold hand, and before Julien could do anything, he began to feel as frozen as ice and he couldn't move anymore : he had become a snowman !
Hello ! He was pushing his bike when he heard a strange noise. Maybe it was only the sound of the wind but maybe not. He wasn't scared but he wanted to come home. The atmosphere was tense and the boy started to accelerate his walking. He felt that something followed him. He took out his phone to check if there was any network. When something moved. He left his bike and ran into the giant forest. Something followed him and he known that he had to run for his life. Exhausted by his race, he hid himself under a tree and hoped no one would find him.
It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he saw a house. He walked towards this house thinking somebody could help him but noticed that the front door was standing open. When he entered something caught his eye. At the foot of the bed lay a head. It was covered in grey hair. There was an old man, his face turned upwards and his eyes open. He was dead. Julien started to run as fast as he could, the locked door suddenly crashed open and an old lady was standing there. She tried to grab him but he kept running, he didn’t dare to look back. We never heard of him since that day.
He was pushing his bike when a light appeared, he was dazzled. What was it? He remained frozen, unable to move, he reflected. The blinding light was getting closer ... He was frightened, the wind was blowing hard, louder and louder. His ears were hissing, his legs were shaking and his bike could't ride. While this strange light approached and grew more and more, an acute, loud noise was heard. He felt something pass behind him, then in front, it was really fast that he could only make out a shadow. The luminous object approached, but slowly, Julien then saw a van. The driver stopped and suggested to go upstairs; Julien was reassured and went up immediately, accompanied by his bike. Nevertheless, the thing he had seen was still a mystery to him.
A car passed and stopped near him the driver asked him that he wanted to deposit him. Julien repplied that he wanted to join the nearest village so the driver invited him to go in the car. Suddenly Julien realized that they were not going in the right direction. The driver accelerated. He drived very fast. He looked the driver's skin, she was black and a smell of rot was realized, she was rotting. His joints were cracking. The driver became a skeleton. The car went to a ravine.
Sorry I made some mistakes: The driver asked him if he wanted a lift to go somewhere. / he wanted to go to the nearest village ...to get into the car/ The driver drove faster and faster... he was black and smell of rot was everywhere in the car...went into
It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when a car passed next to him. It was a lonely road that crossed a dark forest. The driver lowered the window and asked Julien if he needed help. At the begining Julien was happy to see someone, he was really afraid to be alone in this forest. But as he looked at the face of the driver, he started to have a weird feeling : he could not trust this man. Still he answered yes and the car stopped next to him. Julien was more frightened by the smile of the driver than the dark forest, that a few minutes ago, was for him the scariest thing in the world. The man asked him to get inside his car so he could drive him to the nearest city. As Julien refused, an angry look became to appear on the face of the man. He tried to catch Julien who had only one option : he left his poor bike on the road and started runing in the forest, where he hoped that the crazy driver would not follow him.
I'm sorry,I made some mistakes : -" It was a lonely road that went throught a forest " - " be afraid of being alone in" - " a few minutes ago" - " began to appear"
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he saw a young girl. She was sat in the grass. She was a red-haired girl. She wore a beautiful white dress with small red shoes. However, she was trembling and was bleeding with her right hand and had opened her knee. Julien went her see. He asked him how did she make that ? She told him that someone assaulted him and she had to run the most rapidly that she can but she fell on the ground. Julien asked her where did she live ? She answered that she live behind the village. He take him with her and he go her home. He treat her and he prepared her a good meal. She proposed him to stay to sleep until he repair his bike (it was a way for her to thank him). He accepted and the next day he resumed his bike.
It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he heard a strange noise coming from the dark forest. Surprised, frightened but also curious, Julien brutally stopped and looked nervously all around him but saw nothing, his heart was pounding very fast. Julien was going to continue pushing his bike when he heard another noise, louder than the first, which was looking like a grunt with heavy friction on the floor. Julien began to panic and wanted to accelerate when he saw a huge shadow on the ground behind him, he turned around screaming but he saw only a small cat. Reassured, Julien wanted to start pushing his bike but it was disappeared. Incredulous, he looked around and saw a very large cat jumping on him like last vision of the life. To conclude, I would say that cats are evil beings... good bye !
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when suddenly… he saw something running through the bushes in front of him, it looked like a human but at the same time it’s eyes were red as the devil’s skin, his heart started beating faster and faster, he tried to calm down but he knew deep inside that what he just saw wasn’t normal… he was so afraid that he left his bike and ran, he ran as fast as he could. When he thought he was far away enough from this strange devilish shadow, he stopped but he knew at that moment that it was too late… he turned around and darkness came all over him…he was definitely lost.
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when...he heard some music coming from what he thought was a simple student party, and even if he promised his mom that he wouldn't come home too late but this heady music had a strange hold on him, so he decided to follow it and walked through the wood. It was like a siren's call to his ears and couldn't leave his mind. The sweet noise grew as Justin went further and became unsustainable, it had evolded into screams mingling with an unbearable scent of burning when Julien get closer to the house. But when Julien arrived he saw a house which had the air of a haunted mansion, as soon as he understood, Julien ran faster than ever, letting his bike on the way home. It was the terrible house where a few students died during a frightful party when the house burnt by accident, everyone in the town says that this house is haunted.
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he looked to his watch and realized that he was very late. His parents must have been worried and his cell phone was empty so he couldn't warn them. Suddendly, he saw a car stopped next to him. Then he recognized the driver : it was his old friend from primary school. He was surprised because he didn't see him for ten years. The driver suggested to bring him back to his house. Julien accepted and thanks him, he was happy to see him. During the ride, they talked aubout the past, the good time and they realized in a funny way that it was better when they were children. They thought about their old classmates and teachers that they had in class. They were nostalgic of this period. When they arrived, the old friend dropped Julien off his home and left him after saying goobye. Julien never saw his old friend again.
Hello!
ReplyDeleteHe was pushing his bike when he heard a terrifying noise coming from far away. He dropped his bike and put it under a tree in the wood. He started walking following the noise that was coming. Whenever, he took a step forward the noise becomes more and more deep and terrifying. After ten minutes of walking he discovered a large black metal door that suddenly opened in front of him. Julien had a desire to enter to see what was there but at the same time he was frightened. Suddenly when he decided to enter ; the door closed very quickly and finished being stuck. From now on , Julien could not get out of that door.
I made some mistake : the noise became
ReplyDeleteHello!
ReplyDeleteHe was pushing his bike when he saw something in a terrifying forest. By taking a step back, Julien thought that nothing really dangerous could be here.Little by little, he saw a profile of someone who was moving really slowly. He caught sight of a men who was leaning on a kind of weird staff. The man was getting closer of Julien. Suddenly, Julien saw the face of the man. He was desfigured and had a knife. He was holding it in his second hand. When he saw that, Julien left his bike and ran away.
Julien was pushing his bike when he saw a strange light in the middle of a field next to him. He came closer to it, and saw a white ghost who was shining brightly, and moving towards him. When he realized it, he began to run, but the ghost was soon just behind him and Julien could hear his deep voice whispering some words into his ear : "where are you running to ? You can’t escape !" And suddently, the ghost touched him with his cold hand, and before Julien could do anything, he began to feel as frozen as ice and he couldn't move anymore : he had become a snowman !
ReplyDeleteHello i made some few mistakes:
ReplyDeleteCould be THERE instead of could be HERE
Getting closer TO and not getting closer OF
DISFIGURED instead of DESFIGURED
Hello !
ReplyDeleteHe was pushing his bike when he heard a strange noise. Maybe it was only the sound of the wind but maybe not. He wasn't scared but he wanted to come home. The atmosphere was tense and the boy started to accelerate his walking. He felt that something followed him. He took out his phone to check if there was any network. When something moved. He left his bike and ran into the giant forest. Something followed him and he known that he had to run for his life. Exhausted by his race, he hid himself under a tree and hoped no one would find him.
I make a mistake
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It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he saw a house.
ReplyDeleteHe walked towards this house thinking somebody could help him but noticed that the front door was standing open. When he entered something caught his eye. At the foot of the bed lay a head. It was covered in grey hair. There was an old man, his face turned upwards and his eyes open. He was dead. Julien started to run as fast as he could, the locked door suddenly crashed open and an old lady was standing there. She tried to grab him but he kept running, he didn’t dare to look back. We never heard of him since that day.
I made a few mistakes :
Delete- “...thinking that somebody might help him.”
-“It was covered with...”
He was pushing his bike when a light appeared, he was dazzled. What was it? He remained frozen, unable to move, he reflected. The blinding light was getting closer ... He was frightened, the wind was blowing hard, louder and louder. His ears were hissing, his legs were shaking and his bike could't ride. While this strange light approached and grew more and more, an acute, loud noise was heard. He felt something pass behind him, then in front, it was really fast that he could only make out a shadow. The luminous object approached, but slowly, Julien then saw a van. The driver stopped and suggested to go upstairs; Julien was reassured and went up immediately, accompanied by his bike. Nevertheless, the thing he had seen was still a mystery to him.
ReplyDeleteSorry, but I made some mistakes:
Delete- and he could't ride his bike;
- a loud noise;
- so that he could only make out;
- and offered to take him home.
A car passed and stopped near him the driver asked him that he wanted to deposit him. Julien repplied that he wanted to join the nearest village so the driver invited him to go in the car. Suddenly Julien realized that they were not going in the right direction. The driver accelerated. He drived very fast. He looked the driver's skin, she was black and a smell of rot was realized, she was rotting. His joints were cracking. The driver became a skeleton. The car went to a ravine.
ReplyDeleteSorry I made some mistakes: The driver asked him if he wanted a lift to go somewhere. / he wanted to go to the nearest village ...to get into the car/ The driver drove faster and faster... he was black and smell of rot was everywhere in the car...went into
DeleteHello, here is my correction:
ReplyDelete-started to walk faster
-He felt that something was following him
-He knew that he had to run
It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when a car passed next to him. It was a lonely road that crossed a dark forest. The driver lowered the window and asked Julien if he needed help. At the begining Julien was happy to see someone, he was really afraid to be alone in this forest. But as he looked at the face of the driver, he started to have a weird feeling : he could not trust this man. Still he answered yes and the car stopped next to him. Julien was more frightened by the smile of the driver than the dark forest, that a few minutes ago, was for him the scariest thing in the world. The man asked him to get inside his car so he could drive him to the nearest city. As Julien refused, an angry look became to appear on the face of the man. He tried to catch Julien who had only one option : he left his poor bike on the road and started runing in the forest, where he hoped that the crazy driver would not follow him.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry,I made some mistakes : -" It was a lonely road that went throught a forest "
Delete- " be afraid of being alone in"
- " a few minutes ago"
- " began to appear"
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he saw a young girl. She was sat in the grass. She was a red-haired girl. She wore a beautiful white dress with small red shoes. However, she was trembling and was bleeding with her right hand and had opened her knee. Julien went her see. He asked him how did she make that ? She told him that someone assaulted him and she had to run the most rapidly that she can but she fell on the ground. Julien asked her where did she live ? She answered that she live behind the village. He take him with her and he go her home. He treat her and he prepared her a good meal. She proposed him to stay to sleep until he repair his bike (it was a way for her to thank him). He accepted and the next day he resumed his bike.
ReplyDeleteHello!
ReplyDeleteIt was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he heard a strange noise coming from the dark forest. Surprised, frightened but also curious, Julien brutally stopped and looked nervously all around him but saw nothing, his heart was pounding very fast. Julien was going to continue pushing his bike when he heard another noise, louder than the first, which was looking like a grunt with heavy friction on the floor. Julien began to panic and wanted to accelerate when he saw a huge shadow on the ground behind him, he turned around screaming but he saw only a small cat. Reassured, Julien wanted to start pushing his bike but it was disappeared. Incredulous, he looked around and saw a very large cat jumping on him like last vision of the life. To conclude, I would say that cats are evil beings...
good bye !
Sorry I made some mistakes:
Delete« ..which seemed to be grunt.. »
« ..but it had disappeared.. »
Hello !
ReplyDeleteJulien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when suddenly… he saw something running through the bushes in front of him, it looked like a human but at the same time it’s eyes were red as the devil’s skin, his heart started beating faster and faster, he tried to calm down but he knew deep inside that what he just saw wasn’t normal… he was so afraid that he left his bike and ran, he ran as fast as he could. When he thought he was far away enough from this strange devilish shadow, he stopped but he knew at that moment that it was too late… he turned around and darkness came all over him…he was definitely lost.
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Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when...he heard some music coming from what he thought was a simple student party, and even if he promised his mom that he wouldn't come home too late but this heady music had a strange hold on him, so he decided to follow it and walked through the wood.
ReplyDeleteIt was like a siren's call to his ears and couldn't leave his mind.
The sweet noise grew as Justin went further and became unsustainable, it had evolded into screams mingling with an unbearable scent of burning when Julien get closer to the house.
But when Julien arrived he saw a house which had the air of a haunted mansion, as soon as he understood, Julien ran faster than ever, letting his bike on the way home.
It was the terrible house where a few students died during a frightful party when the house burnt by accident, everyone in the town says that this house is haunted.
Julien was riding across the countryside when he had to stop because of a punctured tyre. It was getting dark and he was pushing his bike when he looked to his watch and realized that he was very late. His parents must have been worried and his cell phone was empty so he couldn't warn them. Suddendly, he saw a car stopped next to him. Then he recognized the driver : it was his old friend from primary school. He was surprised because he didn't see him for ten years. The driver suggested to bring him back to his house. Julien accepted and thanks him, he was happy to see him. During the ride, they talked aubout the past, the good time and they realized in a funny way that it was better when they were children. They thought about their old classmates and teachers that they had in class. They were nostalgic of this period. When they arrived, the old friend dropped Julien off his home and left him after saying goobye. Julien never saw his old friend again.
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