2013/12/06

Invent a story: I heard the phone ringing

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  1. This morning I was in English class , and we were in exam , everybody was very concentrated. Suddenly I heard the phone ringing , but i don't knew where it came from...so , all the pupils were returned to me , i have understood it was my phone .
    I had apologized to my teacher and to my comrades for the disturbing. I had never felt a such shame !

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    1. Everybody has or had a very good friend.

      In primary school, I met Kate Davies. She became my best friend. But after our studies, we didn’t keep contact. Besides, I hadn’t her telephone number so I couldn’t call her.
      One day, I was at the airport to go to Paris and I heard the phone ringing… Who was this person? It was Kate. I was really surprised! She immediately asked me to meet us in a pub near of London. I left quickly the airport to meet my childhood friend.

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    2. But after our studies, *we lost contact. * I didn't have her telephone number so I couldn't call her.
      *I was at the airport in London. *Who was it?
      *I was really surprised to hear from her.
      *She invited me to meet her in a pub.

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    3. Correction : text of Ornella :
      " we were sitting a test, everybody was focused on their work.. " " Suddenly we heard.. " " But I didn't know the song is coming from.. " " Then, I became aware that all the other pupils were looking at me.." " I realized that it was my phone.. " " I apologize to my teacher and to my classmates for disturbing them.. " " I had never felt so ashamed.. "

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  2. Have you ever being afraied about a phone ringing ? I'm going to tell how it can be possible.

    When I was youger, with my best friend we loved horror film. Therefore, she went at home to watch ''the ring''. It's the story of a cassette without label wich contains strange images. When someone viewed it, the phone ring and a voice tell us ''you are going to die in 7 days'' and it always happens. We were already afraid about this story and moreover when the film was finished, my phone rand. At that time, I wanted to cry whereas it was just my mum who wanted to know if we were fine without her.

    That's why I was afraied about a phone ringing. To sum up, we must tell children to don't believe movies.

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    1. " afraid.. " " younger.. " " so she came to my house to watch the ring.. " " which.. " " While we were watching it.. " " a phone rang in the movie and a voice said : You will die.. " " This phenomenen always happened.." " We were afraid because of this story.." " And to make it worse, at the end of the film, my phone rang.. " Ne pas mettre " At that time" " but it was just my mum.. " Ne pas mettre " without her "

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    2. afraid of.
      When I was younger, my best friend and I loved watching horror films.
      a cassette with no label

      Thanks for your help Clara!

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  3. Usually, I have to turn off my phone before I go to sleep but when my mother is busy with other things, I keep it with me. But one day, it rang in the middle of the night.

    I was under my covers and I was texting to friends when it rang very loudly; I quickly stoped it. I texted again my friends and it rang once again! I didn't recognize the number so I put it on silence.
    It rang a third time and I whispered, "hello?" and it was my cousin from the United States! She told me "Suprise ! I'm in Nice at the airport! Can you come and pick me up?" I shouted "Oh !! Yes sure !!"
    My mother came into my room, started to be angry at me but when I explained to her who it was she started to be as excited as me! We dressed quickly and left to pick up my cousin!

    Even if it was fantastic news, my mother was still upset that I had my phone.

    Written by Chloe Bari-Levy

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  4. As for me, I always have an apprehension when my telephone rings, nevertheless, when it's a good news... I am very satisfied ! But, which good news ? I'm going to tell you my story.

    I was very young when I had my first telephone : approximately, ten years old ; my father wanted to please me and made me this present, I was very happy ! He and I made many things together as play video games, play basketball, go fishing, scratch tickets of bingo and many of other things. But one day... everything changed.
    I was with my father, quiet, he read, I drew. Suddenly, my phone rang, it was an unknown number, I picked up and a voice of man shouted : " Congratulations Miss, you won 10 000 euros !! " I did not believe it, I was very surprised ! My father embraced me and was happy for me.

    Eventually, now when my phone ring, I always think again this amazing day.

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  5. When the phone rings, normally you are still waiting for good or bad news but this time it was completely different…

    I was getting ready for the most important test of my life. I checked my bag again, everything was okay for my exam. I took the school bus to Calmette. I walked to the high school, thinking about the test and I was really stress. As I reached the school my phone rang. Who was it? Just my mum!
    "Hello darling, are you ok? Are you ready for your exam?" she said.
    "I'm fine, don't worry, please leave me alone!" I snapped. After hanging up my phone I put it in my pocket and not my bag! How could I be so stupid? Then I saw my friend and I completely forgot about it… We chatted about the exam, I felt relaxed. I knew much more than my friend. They called us into the classroom. I left my bag on the side with the others and the exam started. My fate was decided .After I got my paper, I was reading the questions when I felt something, my phone. Oh my god! I hope it doesn't ring. I look to the clock, there was one hour left. I'm pray.
    "Please, please. Just don't rung." I thought. I was writing some answers but I was too stress to concentrate. The last five minutes.. Dring dring drink...! It is so unfair. The invigilator looked at me with a mischievous smile! He expected it.

    Consequently, I put everything on the back of my mother.

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    1. MY CORRECTING:
      I looked at the clock, there was one hour left. I prayed.
      "Please, please. Just don't ring." I thought. I was writing some answers but I was too stressed to concentrate. The more time spent the more pressure there was. Five minutes left. Dring!!!!! The invigilator looked at me with a mischievous smile! He expected it.
      I blame my mum.

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    2. I looked up the word invigilator because I have never heard it used before, but it is apparently a word! You can also use the word proctor for surveillant(e).

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  6. A phone ringing is normal. When you call someone, his phone rings, what's the crazinest about that? Absolutely nothing because that the normal routine of calling somebody...
    That's how I thought until two weeks ago.. So, what made me change my mind?

    I really don't know how to begin my story.
    Let's just say I was sleeping during the night and I heard the house phone ringing . I didn't do anything and didn't get out of bed because I was tired and too lazy to go downstairs to see who's calling in the middle of the night. I only looked what time it was on my iPad : 4.00 a.m sharp.
    The next night, I fell asleep normally and then, at the same time, my house phone rang again !! Very angry, I ran out of my bedroom and picked up quickly the phone and I said : " - You must have nothing else to do and no life to have the pleasure of calling people in 4 o'clock in the morning! Are you insane? What do you want and who are you?".
    The person didn't answer me, I only heard someone breathing and then, laughing in a sadistic way. It gave me chills and I hung up immediately. After that, I couldn't go to sleep again.

    To conclude, when a person is calling you in your house phone at 4a.m, make sure you know the number. If you don't, do whatever you want but If you want to sleep again, take my advise and make sure you know who is calling.

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    1. ...what's the crazy thing about that?... I couldn't get back to sleep... advice...

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  7. Keep on trying to correct each other you will all gain from it.

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  8. This morning, at 8 am, I was sleeping, then I heard phone ringing, thus I woke up and I picked up the phone, It was a friend who live near of my house, who warned me that I didn't close my gate, I thanked him, then I was moving towards my door, suddenly, I realized that my door was not locked, then I remembered that,yesterday night exhausted I didn't do this things, after that I meant to pay attention now.

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  9. Hello
    Yesterday in class, i heard my phone ringing, so I hurried to turn it off but the teacher heard him ring and took it to me. At the end of the hour the teacher told me that my father would have to get it back in his office.

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